Mistake one: too many traits
"Smart, kind, sarcastic, loyal, sensitive, hot-tempered, loves cats." Seven traits and not a single personality. When there are too many qualities, they cancel each other out, and in every scene the character shows a random one.
Two is enough. One you see right away, the other shows up later and pushes back against the first a little. Everything else will grow out of those two on its own.
Mistake two: no inner conflict
If both traits point the same way ("kind and caring"), the character has nothing to wrestle with inside, which means nothing to decide. Conflict is when qualities pull in different directions: brave, but terrified of being alone; a cynic who secretly helps out at a shelter; a cold debt collector who's ashamed of his job.
Pairs like that produce unexpected choices. You don't know ahead of time which side will win today, and neither does the character.









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